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The line graphs shows number of cases of x disease in some land from1960 till 1995.

The line graphs shows number of cases of x disease in some land from1960 till 1995.
The line graph provides information on the number of
X
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disease
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cases
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 in Someland from 1960 to 1995.
Overall
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, the chart indicates that
although
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 the
disease
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 was prevalent in varying numbers at different time intervals, it was entirely eradicated by the end of the period.
To begin
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 with, the incidence of
X
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disease
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 had an upward trajectory in the first 15 years. The incidence rate was 100
cases
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 between 1960 and 1965.
This
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 figure rose marginally by an additional 100
cases
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 in 1970 and
then
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 skyrocketed, reaching a peak of 500 in 1975. The occurrence of
X
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disease
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 remained stagnant between 1975 and 1980 at 500 affected individuals. From 1980 onwards, the number of
cases
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 took a downward trend,
initially
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 decreasing slowly to approximately 380
cases
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 around 1985.
Then
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 it fell abruptly to zero. The number of people affected by
X
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disease
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 in Someland has been zero from 1990 to 1995.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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