The line graphs shows number of cases of x disease in some land from1960 till 1995.

The line graphs shows number of cases of x disease in some land from1960 till 1995.
The line graph provides information on the number of
X
disease
cases
in Someland from 1960 to 1995.
Overall
, the chart indicates that
although
the
disease
was prevalent in varying numbers at different time intervals, it was entirely eradicated by the end of the period.
To begin
with, the incidence of
X
disease
had an upward trajectory in the first 15 years. The incidence rate was 100
cases
between 1960 and 1965.
This
figure rose marginally by an additional 100
cases
in 1970 and
then
skyrocketed, reaching a peak of 500 in 1975. The occurrence of
X
disease
remained stagnant between 1975 and 1980 at 500 affected individuals. From 1980 onwards, the number of
cases
took a downward trend,
initially
decreasing slowly to approximately 380
cases
around 1985.
Then
it fell abruptly to zero. The number of people affected by
X
disease
in Someland has been zero from 1990 to 1995.
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