The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

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of products transferred to the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four separate ways of transport.

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, goods transported through roads were by far the highest throughout all the years. Even though water and rail transportation were the same in the beginning, the rail deteriorated and the water carrier increased.

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, In 1974, road transportation started at approximately 50

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it grew slowly. Following the road transport, the water started at 40

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and it was steady until around 1997 it increased instantly.

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the rail carrier started

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at 40

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, it fluctuated at a decreasing rate.

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, the lowest transport of them all was the pipeline. From 1974 till 1982 respectively, the pipeline was in a growing trend going from below 20

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to over it.

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, after 1982 it was constant with no significant changes.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Transported goods
Quantities
Trends
Modes of transport
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Road
Water
Pipeline
Fluctuations
Predominance
Economic influences
Societal changes
Technological advancements
Environmental impact
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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

some people think that money makes a live comfortable while other believe that having a large amount of money brings more trouble do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages ?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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