The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The diagram illustrates the
numbers
of products transferred to the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four separate ways of transport.
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number
Overall
, goods transported through roads were by far the highest throughout all the years. Even though water and rail transportation were the same in the beginning, the rail deteriorated and the water carrier increased.
To begin
, In 1974, road transportation started at approximately 50 million
tonnes
, but then
it grew slowly. Following the road transport, the water started at 40 million
tonnes
and it was steady until around 1997 it increased instantly. whereas
the rail carrier started also
at 40 million
tonnes
, however
, it fluctuated at a decreasing rate. Lastly
, the lowest transport of them all was the pipeline. From 1974 till 1982 respectively, the pipeline was in a growing trend going from below 20 million
tonnes
to over it. Moreover
, after 1982 it was constant with no significant changes.Submitted by jowanaalamoudi on
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