The diagrams show the structure of the solar panel and its use

The diagrams show the structure of the solar panel and its use
The pictures provide information about the usage
process
of solar panels to heat
water
.
Overall
, there are extensive steps to convert
air
and
water
to be warmer.
In addition
,
this
process
needs several materials
such
as a
box
and waterpipe.
Firstly
, the
process
starts with preparing the
box
with good materials
such
as metals or plastics
then
making 2 holes in the right and left side. After that, the
box
needs coverage with transparent glass to improve the number of sunlight on the solar panel heater
then
the
process
begins when the sunlight is gathered by the transparent top,
while
the cool
air
flows into the ox and it changes from cold
air
to warm
air
because it condensates
process
inside the
box
.
Lastly
, the cool
water
moves after the cool
air
into the U type of
water
pipe inside the
box
,
then
the radiation of sun rays transforms the cold pipe to warm pipe so the
water
inside increases the temperature.
Subsequently
, the warm
water
flows from the
water
heater to the bathroom.
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