The diagrams show the structure of the solar panel and its use

The diagrams show the structure of the solar panel and its use
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The pictures provide information about the usage
process
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of solar panels to heat
water
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.
Overall
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, there are extensive steps to convert
air
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and
water
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to be warmer.
In addition
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,
this
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process
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needs several materials
such
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as a
box
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and waterpipe.
Firstly
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, the
process
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starts with preparing the
box
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with good materials
such
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as metals or plastics
then
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making 2 holes in the right and left side. After that, the
box
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needs coverage with transparent glass to improve the number of sunlight on the solar panel heater
then
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the
process
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begins when the sunlight is gathered by the transparent top,
while
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the cool
air
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flows into the ox and it changes from cold
air
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to warm
air
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because it condensates
process
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inside the
box
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.
Lastly
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, the cool
water
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moves after the cool
air
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into the U type of
water
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pipe inside the
box
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,
then
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the radiation of sun rays transforms the cold pipe to warm pipe so the
water
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inside increases the temperature.
Subsequently
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, the warm
water
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flows from the
water
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heater to the bathroom.
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