The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian
women
delivering their firstborns in six age groups in the years
1966, 1986 and 2006. Overall
, it is clear that
the age of women
giving birth
to their first kid is going older over the period
of forty years
.
According to
the data, women
aged 19-24 years
old were at the highest rate
in 1966, at 60%. The rate
, however
, gradually decreased until it reached below 30% forty years
later. Similarly
, teenage women
(under 19 years
old) showed a downward trend throughout the period
as well, from around 35% in 1966 to below 15% at the end
of the period
.
On the other hand
, the rate
of mature women
(aged from 30 to 34 years
old) giving birth
for their time consistently grew by 30% in four decades. This
pattern also
applied to the rate
of giving birth
for females between 34 and 39 years
old, albeit not as much as those aged from 30 to 34 years
old, by around 20
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40
years
. The rate
of women
aged 25 to 30 years
old delivering their first babies, however
, climbed up from around 35% in 1966 to 50% two decades later, before it experienced a downfall in the next twenty years
by around 12%. Furthermore
, the rate
of giving birth
for women
over 40 was consistently the lowest compared to the other age groups throughout the period
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