You’ve received a letter from your English pen-friend in which he/she accepts your invitation to come and stay with you in Ukraine for a week. Write a letter to your penfriend and say – when the best time to come is and why – what tourist atractions there are in your area – what activities he/she could enjoy during the visit
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Dear Jim,
I am so excited you accept my invitation to
visit
my country. We never met each other since we start wrote letters to each other 3 years ago. I am going to share more details about the trip we are planning.
The best season to visit
to
Ukraine should be in the middle of Autumn Remove the preposition
apply
cause
the temperature is comfortable and you can join Correct word choice
because
traditional
Correct article usage
a traditional
festival
about Fix the agreement mistake
festivals
the
harvesting. That's why I recommend you come from 15/9 and stay until 27/9.
I Correct article usage
apply
excited
to show you how fascinating Kive are. You will never regret spending a week to Add a missing verb
am excited
visit
this
charming city of Ukraine. One of the popular tourist spots are
Independence Square which Change the verb form
is
locate
in the centre of Kive, just two blocks away from my home. Wrong verb form
is located
Furthermore
, one of the famous domestic market
Change to a plural noun
markets
has been
established over a hundred years ago. I think you would enjoy to spend amount of Wrong verb form
was
times
Fix the agreement mistake
time
to know
about pedestrian daily life.
As you mentioned before, you are attracted to historical events during the Soviet Union era. I have already planned a route Verb problem
learning
of
trip to Change preposition
apply
visit
several sites which have major events in history.
Hope you appreciate my plans. I cannot wait more
to meet you personally.
Best Regards,
WongCorrect quantifier usage
apply
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language
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use the correct tense. For example, 'we never met' should be 'we have never met'.
language
Ensure that place names are spelled correctly. 'Kive' should be 'Kiev'.
language
Make sure to use natural and fluent sentence structures. For example, 'join traditional festival about the harvesting' could be 'participate in traditional harvest festivals'.
structure
The letter has a clear structure with an opening, body paragraphs, and a closing.
tone
The tone of the letter is warm and suitable for the context of writing to a pen-friend.