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You’ve received a letter from your English pen-friend in which he/she accepts your invitation to come and stay with you in Ukraine for a week. Write a letter to your pen￾friend and say – when the best time to come is and why – what tourist atractions there are in your area – what activities he/she could enjoy during the visit

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Dear Jim, I am so excited you accept my invitation to
visit
 my country. We never met each other since we start wrote letters to each other 3 years ago. I am going to share more details about the trip we are planning. The best season to
visit
to
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Ukraine should be in the middle of Autumn
cause
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because
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 the temperature is comfortable and you can join
traditional
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a traditional
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festival
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festivals
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 about
the
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harvesting. That's why I recommend you come from 15/9 and stay until 27/9. I
excited
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 to show you how fascinating Kive are. You will never regret spending a week to
visit
this
 charming city of Ukraine. One of the popular tourist spots
are
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 Independence Square which
locate
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 in the centre of Kive, just two blocks away from my home.
Furthermore
, one of the famous domestic
market
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markets
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has been
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was
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 established over a hundred years ago. I think you would enjoy to spend amount of
times
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time
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to know
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learning
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 about pedestrian daily life. As you mentioned before, you are attracted to historical events during the Soviet Union era. I have already planned a route
of
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trip to
visit
 several sites which have major events in history. Hope you appreciate my plans. I cannot wait
more
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to meet you personally. Best Regards, Wong
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language
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use the correct tense. For example, 'we never met' should be 'we have never met'.
language
Ensure that place names are spelled correctly. 'Kive' should be 'Kiev'.
language
Make sure to use natural and fluent sentence structures. For example, 'join traditional festival about the harvesting' could be 'participate in traditional harvest festivals'.
structure
The letter has a clear structure with an opening, body paragraphs, and a closing.
tone
The tone of the letter is warm and suitable for the context of writing to a pen-friend.

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