The maps below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.

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The maps illustrate the changes that have occurred in Seaville, a coastal

village

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, over a

30 year

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period beginning in 1980 and ending in 2010.

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, significant developments are evident in the

village

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’s infrastructure, including

construction

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the construction

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of more facilities for villagers. First of all, the

village

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had experienced significant changes in its transportation network. A main road was extended from the north to

east

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the east

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bank and a new bridge

built

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over the river.

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this

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, a road connecting the retirement

village

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was constructed, with a linking road between new blocks of permanent houses. The business sector of Seaville has

also

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altered. Tea

room

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and sand dunes in the south-east were reconstructed into a modern restaurant and hotel. The woodland was cleared and replaced with a golf house.

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, the green area in the

north-east

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northeast

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was replaced by many infrastructure projects,

such

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as a boat club along the river and a retirement

village

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behind a hotel. There have

also

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been changes to the housing sector of the small town, particularly in the south-west of the Seaville, where marshlands were replaced with new permanent houses for resident

village

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citizens.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

189 words

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The maps below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.

More houses are needed in many countries to cope with increasing populations. Would it be better to build houses in existing towns and cities, or to develop new towns in rural areas?

More and more people use private motorbikes or cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience