The maps below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.
The maps illustrate the changes that have occurred in Seaville, a coastal
village
, over a 30 year
period beginning in 1980 and ending in 2010. Add a hyphen
30-year
Overall
, significant developments are evident in the village
’s infrastructure, including construction
of more facilities for villagers.
First of all, the Add an article
the construction
village
had experienced significant changes in its transportation network. A main road was extended from the north to east
bank and a new bridge Correct article usage
the east
built
over the river. Add a missing verb
was built
In addition
to this
, a road connecting the retirement village
was constructed, with a linking road between new blocks of permanent houses.
The business sector of Seaville has also
altered. Tea room
and sand dunes in the south-east were reconstructed into a modern restaurant and hotel. The woodland was cleared and replaced with a golf house. Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
Additionally
, the green area in the north-east
was replaced by many infrastructure projects, Correct your spelling
northeast
such
as a boat club along the river and a retirement village
behind a hotel.
There have also
been changes to the housing sector of the small town, particularly in the south-west of the Seaville, where marshlands were replaced with new permanent houses for resident village
citizens.Submitted by Aqxniet on
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