The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
sales
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around the world of various types of digital
games
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between the year 2000 and 2006.
Overall
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, the
sales
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of Handheld
games
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, online
games
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and mobile phone
games
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increased over the years and handheld
games
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were able to make the biggest sale surpassing the others by 2006. Console
games
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gradually decreased their global
sales
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throughout the years. Handheld
games
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made just below 12
billion
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in 2000 and were able to elevate their
sales
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to nearly 18
billion
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within 6 years. Online
games
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made their appearance in 2001 and were able to be the second highest-selling digital game in 2006, making around 9
billion
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sales
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. Mobile phone
games
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began their
sales
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in 2002, tallying up with online
games
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sales
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and in 2005 managed to surpass online
games
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and achieve 6
billion
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dollars in
sales
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. Meanwhile, console
games
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had
sales
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just below 6
billion
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dollars in 2000 yet gradually reduced their
sales
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, and consecutively had the lowest
sales
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, nearly 4
billion
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and 3
billion
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in 2005 and 2006 respectively.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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