Your workplace does not have a parking area for cars, and it is causing some problems. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: – Describe the problems it has caused. – Explain what benefits a parking area would bring to the company. – Suggest a solution.
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coherence cohesion
The letter needs a clearer logical structure. Start with clear paragraphs for each point you want to make: the problems, the benefits, and the solution.
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Improve your grammar and punctuation by proofreading your letter. Small errors like misspellings and missing punctuation marks can detract from the overall clarity of your writing.
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Use a formal tone and professional language throughout the letter, as you are addressing your manager.
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You have addressed an important issue that affects many employees, showing insight into workplace problems.
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You offered a feasible solution by suggesting that the company should allocate a budget for building a parking area.
coherence cohesion
The overall intent and purpose of the letter are clear, indicating your genuine concern for the wellbeing of your colleagues.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,