The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrations below depict young people previously joining three types of
dance
namely Ballet, Tap
as well as
Modern in four different locations, Community
halls
& other, School
halls
(after-school), College-based
studios
and Private
studios
in Australia.
Overall
, it can be seen that dancers who join Private
Studios
have the largest proportion,
whereas
college-based
Studios
have the lowest proportion. Meanwhile, Ballet is the most popular
dance
in the age group who are under 11. Modern
dance
chosen by 11-16-year-old teenagers,
on the other hand
, is the most prevalent
dance
type. Looking through the pie chart, dancers are more into practising dancing skills in Private
Studios
, accounting for 48%.
By contrast
, College-based
Studios
only have 10% of individuals among the dancers in the town.
Also
, there are 24% of people who participate in the School
Halls
after school, which is not many, followed by Community
halls
& other, accounting for 18%. Based on the information given in the bar graph, it is obvious that Ballet classes have the largest number of students who are under 11 years old, at approximately 600. Dramatically, those who are in the 11-16 age group are more attracted to the Modern
dance
, at about 510.
Finally
, Tap
dance
has similar members from both two age groups, at nearly 450 and 420 respectively.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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