The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrations below depict young people previously joining three types of
dance
namely Ballet, Tap as well as
Modern in four different locations, Community halls
& other, School halls
(after-school), College-based studios
and Private studios
in Australia.
Overall
, it can be seen that dancers who join Private Studios
have the largest proportion, whereas
college-based Studios
have the lowest proportion. Meanwhile, Ballet is the most popular dance
in the age group who are under 11. Modern dance
chosen by 11-16-year-old teenagers, on the other hand
, is the most prevalent dance
type.
Looking through the pie chart, dancers are more into practising dancing skills in Private Studios
, accounting for 48%. By contrast
, College-based Studios
only have 10% of individuals among the dancers in the town. Also
, there are 24% of people who participate in the School Halls
after school, which is not many, followed by Community halls
& other, accounting for 18%.
Based on the information given in the bar graph, it is obvious that Ballet classes have the largest number of students who are under 11 years old, at approximately 600. Dramatically, those who are in the 11-16 age group are more attracted to the Modern dance
, at about 510. Finally
, Tap dance
has similar members from both two age groups, at nearly 450 and 420 respectively.Submitted by bubblehead1213 on
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