You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to respond to your letter about
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the payement
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payement
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payment
of 70$ charges because my bank
account
is over-drawn 240$.
Firstly
, my
account
is opened in your bank 6 years ago.
In
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this
moment, the responsible have informed me about the absence of charges
payement
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payment
if the
account
is
over-drawn
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overdrawn
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300$.
Secondly
,
i
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I
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have
sended
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sent
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one years ago an e-mail to the bank to demand the close of
this
account
. I will send you a
copie
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copy
of
this
mail.
Finally
, in
this
case
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i
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I
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propose
for
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that
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yours
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your
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personals to
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personnel
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verify the all information
i
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I
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have mentioned in
this
letter. I want an appointment with you
for presenting
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to present
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all the documents about
this
problem. Thank you sir for your interest and I'm
waiting
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your response. Yours sincerely
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suitable writing tone
Try to use more formal language and double-check for spelling and grammatical errors to improve clarity.
complete response
Ensure that all key points are thoroughly explained for a more complete response.
logical structure
Your letter has a clear and logical structure, which makes it easy to follow.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate for the context, which contributes to a formal tone of the letter.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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