The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart illustrates the ratio of households with four types of
devices
during 20 years.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that using mobile phones
was the highest trend in 2000 than other devices
and using tablets started in the middle of 2000 and 2005.
From 1995 to 2000, the rate of using mobile phones
increased sharply around about 55%, while
using computers rose slightly from 5% to 25%. On the other hand
, the percentage of using MP3 players slowly rose over two decades from 5% to 40%.
What is more, the rate of using mobile phones
went up slightly about 20% between 2000 to 2015. However
, the using computer devices
increased more than mobile phones
from 2000 to 2015 from 25% to 90%. Moreover
, tablet devices
suddenly increased from 2007 to 2015.Submitted by [email protected] on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words devices, phones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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