The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table gives information about the proportion of
people
who are 65 years and over in Use synonyms
three
Use synonyms
countries
(Use synonyms
Canada
, Use synonyms
Germany
and the Use synonyms
UK
) in 1988, 2000 and an estimated percentage for 2030. Units are measured in percentages.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there was an increase in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
aged 65 and above in all Use synonyms
three
Use synonyms
countries
. Use synonyms
Germany
had the highest percentage of old Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
UK
had the lowest Use synonyms
number
throughout the period. Despite Use synonyms
this
, all Linking Words
three
Use synonyms
countries
were projected to have increases in their population by 2030.
In 1988, Use synonyms
Germany
had the highest Use synonyms
number
of individuals aged 65 years and over. Use synonyms
This
figure was 20.45% which rose by 5% in 2000 Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
UK
had only 14.23% of Use synonyms
people
aged over 65. Use synonyms
Canada
had the second-highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
aged 65 and over with 16.32%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, between 1998 and 2000, the proportion of old Linking Words
people
increased in all Use synonyms
three
Use synonyms
countries
, but only Use synonyms
Canada
and Use synonyms
Germany
saw considerable increases of around 4% and 5% respectively. Use synonyms
Whereas
, the Linking Words
UK
remained relatively stable at just under 15% in both years.
In 2030, it is expected that the population in all Use synonyms
three
Use synonyms
countries
will increase by more than 5.5%. The percentage is projected to reach 30.42% in Use synonyms
Germany
, 26.35 in Use synonyms
Canada
and 20.35 in the Use synonyms
UK
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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