The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the "Minfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The line chart illustrates the proportion of older people between 1940 to 2040 in three countries.

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, the USA, Sweden, and

Japan

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all will increase in 2024,

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Japan

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will present the highest population. Despite that

Japan

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witnessed the highest increase in 2024, it was the lowest from 1940 to 2020. The other two states were relatively increasing. The highest growth older population will go to

Japan

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with over 25% in 2024, After starting at just 5% in 1940,

then

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decreasing below 5% between 1960 and 1980,

however

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after 2020 the state witnessed a wild fluctuation to present the wildest population in 2024 Despite that, the USA

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the highest growth below 10% in 1940, and it will show the lowest percentage in 2024. Sweden started above 5% in 1940, which steadily increased below 15% between 1980 to 2000 before increasing to just 20% between 2000 to 2020,

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it will show a huge increase with just 20% in 2024.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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160 words

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