You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: Say that you liked their photos of your family Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event Give them the details of the event.
Dear Neha,
How're you doing?
I'
writing in the sense of appreciation for a photograph you took of my family Complete the contraction
I'm
memebrs
was incredible.
Honestly, having Correct your spelling
members
friend
like you can be Add an article
a friend
a
charming for a person. As you may remember, the Change the article
apply
last
family photo you took during our trip to Shimla was very exciting as my all family members really show
a great sense of love and appreciation for it. Now, it is Wrong verb form
showed
hanged
in our lobby where everybody Replace the word
hung
sit
and Change the verb form
sits
talk
about Correct subject-verb agreement
talks
this
photograph regularly.
I would like to invite you to be our photographer for an upcoming event, my sister's wedding is coming next month where
we need a professional photographer who can take amazing photographs Correct word choice
and
along with
scenic backgrounds. I think my all family members will be very happy to see you.
This
event will take place on 24th
of July in the Heartland Convention Centre, situated in Brampton Correct article usage
the 24th
on
the intersection of Queen and Sandalwood. I hope you'll not have any problem with Change preposition
at
this
date and location.
I look forward to your prompt response and happy to see you.
Regards,
Amanjot Kaur.Submitted by amanjotkaur0303 on
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task achievement
Provide more specific praise for the photographer's skills to make your appreciation more detailed.
coherence cohesion
Ensure paragraphs are well-organized and ideas flow smoothly from one to the next.
task achievement
The letter addresses all three points of the task clearly: liking the photos, inviting the photographer, and giving event details.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is warm and positive, suited to writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
There is a logical structure overall, with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and add a personal touch.