The happinessCorrect article usage
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playChange the verb form
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a crucial role in
peopleChange noun form
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lives
.
However
, some
people
say that the happiest
life
is the
teenagerReplace the word
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periodsFix the agreement mistake
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while
others believe that
adult
life
is
of Change preposition
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the
utmost Correct word choice
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happiest
life
even has more
responsibilities
.
This
essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.
On the one hand,
life
is the
most Change the adjective
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happiest period in
human'sChange noun form
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lives
because
do not have any
responsibilities
andCorrect word choice
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commitmentFix the agreement mistake
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studies.
This
is, during
this
time
they are minors, so everything can get
easilyChange the word
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without facing any difficulties,
which Correct pronoun usage
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they just enjoy their
life
with
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parentsChange noun form
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money
, expensive dresses, phones and so on.
For example
, many
nation's minors spend a lot of
money
inChange preposition
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their birthday
due to
they do not have any
and just spend all of
parentsChange noun form
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money
. That's why
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teenagerReplace the word
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periodsFix the agreement mistake
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is the
most Change the adjective
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happiest
time
onChange preposition
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people
's
lives
.
On the other hand
,
adultAdd an article
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period is a vital part of human
lives
even
have more
responsibilities
on the grounds
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adultFix the agreement mistake
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are
being Verb problem
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moeCorrect your spelling
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maturedWrong verb form
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and
they Correct pronoun usage
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know everything what do to and how to
doCorrect pronoun usage
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.
This
means, they do not depend on their
parents
for Change preposition
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financiallyReplace the word
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and they can
takeCorrect your spelling
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any decision for their's
sakesFix the agreement mistake
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.
For instance
, Indian adults
are always beChange the verb form
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happy because
of Change preposition
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they earn
money
along with
taking care of their family
expenses when
are turningWrong verb form
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eighteen meanwhile they can obtain enormous amounts of happiness and satisfaction too.
Hence
, being a responsible person and financially
help toWrong verb form
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their family
that Correct pronoun usage
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can bring more
pleasuresFix the agreement mistake
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.
In conclusion,
although
, teenager
time
does not have any
and they
justAdd a missing verb
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being
chillWrong verb form
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fromChange preposition
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their
parentsChange to a genitive case
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money
and pampering,
adultFix the agreement mistake
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can get more
pleasuresFix the agreement mistake
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from
independentCorrect article usage
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and
support of
family members.
Therefore
, in my opinion,
aboutChange preposition
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this
,
Adult
period is the
most Change the adjective
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happiest
time
in
people
's
lives
even
theyCorrect word choice
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have more
responsibilities
.