In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Somepeople say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The debate over the implications of having an ageing population has sparked considerable controversy. I vehemently believe that the negative impacts of

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notion far

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its few benefits

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the reasons

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essay

further

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on. One major drawback of

this

trend is the workforce decline in affected countries. By lacking physical

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strength

and having

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mental impairment, the elderly cannot take up numerous jobs.

Hence

, the unemployment rates would surge and

also

, the job market would experience a downfall, ultimately jeopardizing a country's economic stability.

Additionally

,

this

instability negatively impacts individuals' living standards.

Moreover

, the old people's potential infirmities require the government to dedicate substantial resources to

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healthcare services,

further

threatening their economy. Iran,

for instance

, where old people account for the greatest group of

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, has been

gramppling

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grappling

with economic recession

due to

the lack of suitable employees and enormous resource allocations to hospitals.

However

, the positive effects of

this

notion should not be overlooked. One potential merit of

this

trend is the heightened possibility of preserving a country's cultural heritage.

This

is mainly because the elderly stand as the great sources of traditional knowledge

such

as rural practices and ancient ways of life. As a

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, youngsters can draw on their experiences to form a sense of identity, prior to promoting

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national pride. Take China as an example; where a pleasant pastime among teenagers is spending time with their grandparents and credit their grandparents for being sophisticated about their rich culture. Despite these benefits, it comes at the cost of posing a significant threat to a nation's economic situation;

therefore

,

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its status on a global scale. In conclusion,

although

there

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few positive implications for countries where the old generation makes up the majority of its

populations

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, I firmly believe the negative sides of it are of higher significance. In fact,

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notion devastatingly affects not only the job market and individuals' life satisfaction but

also

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countries'

economy

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in danger.