The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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taken place at the Seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. A compass for direction is provided.

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, in 1990 there were many trees and scattered buildings

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the

north west

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side. Some trees were cut down and

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homes

demolished

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in 2005 to provide a space where a large supermarket was constructed

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of four huge buildings in

north east

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area. In

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1990 there was neither airstrip near the school

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a factory. These were built in 2005

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the

north west

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areas because many trees needed to be cut down first to offer space for the construction.

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, a ferry was commenced in

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2005 that connected from the newly built supermarket to the railway station.

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the many changes that took place in

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2005, the school and the hospital remained untouched in the same areas they were in

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1990.

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The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

should human adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point.