You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The present maps compare the change of the rural
area
in Ryemouth in 2 different years( 1995 and present.
Overall
, the residential area
in this
district has developed, but both the local market and vegetation zone have been destroyed.
According to
the picture from 1995, on the shore we can see the fish market and fish port with a cafe in front of these they had a shopping centre with a hotel. Also
, inhabitants were accommodated in houses that were in the northwest; moreover
, the green area
was a lot because they had not only the forest park but also
the farmland.
Nevertheless
, this
region has been altering a lot. To illustrate, today, the zone which had farms and forests became a golf and tennis court. In addition
, the hotel added car parking for their passenger. Amazingly, the number of citizens is increasing due to
the fact the housing area
is rising; thereafter
, some apartments were built instead
of fish markets. unfortunately, the shop closed and they opened a restaurant there.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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