It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Natural
talent
is truly a gift from God. Some children are very good at sports and music because they are born with those talents. Use synonyms
However
, some believe that with proper guidance and Linking Words
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work one can Correct your spelling
hard
outshines
natural Change the verb form
outshine
talent
. Use synonyms
Although
, each side has its own merits, and I support the Linking Words
later
view.
On one hand, It is believed that people born with Correct your spelling
latter
talent
are the epitome of success and leadership. These individuals have a natural gift which gives them an advantage in their Use synonyms
field
of Fix the agreement mistake
fields
talent
like athletics, music and Use synonyms
other
. These inborn abilities require little effort to develop but Fix the agreement mistake
others
due to
their natural Linking Words
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talent
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talent,
it
will grow tens of folds. Correct pronoun usage
they
For example
, Messi is a child prodigy, he was born with a Linking Words
talent
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of
football but to become the greatest of all time he had to Change preposition
for
practice
regularly and Use synonyms
continues
to hone his skills.
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continue
On the other hand
, people think that the level of a Linking Words
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god-gifted
talent
can be achieved through Use synonyms
right
education, guidance, and hard work. Even if there is a natural Correct article usage
the right
talent
exists, it Use synonyms
also
needs regular Linking Words
practice
and polishing to make it exceptional and achieve greatness. Use synonyms
For example
, there are many great footballers like Ronaldo who are Linking Words
self made
greatest footballers through their Add a hyphen
self-made
shear
will, hard work and dedication.
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sheer
To conclude
, Linking Words
although
innate Linking Words
talent
can be beneficial and require a little effort to achieve success Use synonyms
but
to maintain that level of success constant Correct word choice
apply
practice
is required. The extraordinary prodigy in any field is a product of both natural Use synonyms
talent
and constant Use synonyms
practice
.Use synonyms
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grammar
Work on sentence structure and grammar to avoid awkward phrasing and minor errors.
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Expand the discussion of the second viewpoint to make it as comprehensive as the first one.
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Consider adding more transitional phrases to further enhance the flow between paragraphs.
structure
Clear introduction and conclusion that effectively frame the essay.
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Relevant examples used to support each viewpoint, especially the use of well-known figures like Messi and Ronaldo to illustrate points.