The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below depicts the mean
daytoday
Correct your spelling
day-to-day
sales
of a particular food products
at the brisk cafe during each Fix the agreement mistake
product
seasons
.
As we can see in the below graphChange to a singular noun
season
that
, Each food Correct pronoun usage
apply
product's
varies its Change the noun form
products
product
sales
through various seasons.
Firstly
, We discuss
Wrong verb form
discussed
about
Hot Remove the preposition
apply
Coffee
, During winter
the profit for coffee
is even higher as compared to the sales
in the summer season.It is quite
profitable Change the article
quite a
a quite
buisness
for Correct your spelling
business
coffee
owners in the winter
.And coming to the next product
that
is Iced Correct pronoun usage
which
coffee
, it is shown that iced coffee
have
a higher influence in the summer Correct subject-verb agreement
has
and
the number of servings is about 40 cups per day and the business is quite down in the Correct word choice
apply
winter
.And the next product
is icecream
, As we can see that Correct your spelling
ice cream
icecream
doesn't have any downs and upwards during each Correct your spelling
ice cream
seasons
and Change to a singular noun
season
its
quite stable and varied by some Correct your spelling
it's
ratio's
. Coming to the next Change noun form
ratios
product
that
is soup, Correct pronoun usage
which
its
having Replace the word
it's
it is
an
high Change the article
a
sales
rate during winter
and about 50 cups of soups
Fix the agreement mistake
soup
sales
per day and 20 to 25 during Replace the word
sold
summer
season.Add an article
the summer
Moreover
, Salad is the only product
that
is having
a stable Wrong verb form
has
sale's
rate.
In Conclusion, The products Change noun form
sales
varies
during each season by their consumption.Change the verb form
vary
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, product, coffee, winter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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