The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below depicts the mean

daytoday

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day-to-day

sales

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of a particular food

products

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product

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at the brisk cafe during each

seasons

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season

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. As we can see in the below graph

that

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apply

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, Each food

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product's

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products

product

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varies its

sales

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through various seasons.

Firstly

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, We

discuss

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discussed

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about

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apply

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Hot

Coffee

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, During

winter

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the profit for

coffee

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is even higher as compared to the

sales

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in the summer season.It is

quite

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quite a

a quite

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profitable

buisness

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business

for

coffee

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owners in the

winter

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.And coming to the next

product

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that

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which

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is Iced

coffee

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, it is shown that iced

coffee

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have

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has

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a higher influence in the summer

and

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apply

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the number of servings is about 40 cups per day and the business is quite down in the

winter

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.And the next

product

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icecream

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ice cream

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, As we can see that

icecream

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ice cream

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doesn't have any downs and upwards during each

seasons

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season

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and

its

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it's

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quite stable and varied by some

ratio's

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ratios

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. Coming to the next

product

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Linking Words

that

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which

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is soup,

its

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it's

it is

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having

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high

sales

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rate during

winter

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and about 50 cups of

soups

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soup

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sales

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sold

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per day and 20 to 25 during

summer

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the summer

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season.

Moreover

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, Salad is the only

product

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that

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is having

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has

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a stable

sale's

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sales

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rate. In Conclusion, The products

varies

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vary

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during each season by their consumption.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, product, coffee, winter with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

198 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

average daily sales
selected food items
seasonal variation
popular
peak
consumer preferences
anomalies
transition seasons
trends
comfort food
beverage
snack
consume
highlight
fluctuations
correspond
plummet
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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.