The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event.   

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates the proportion of total money gained in King Primary School which is
devided
Correct your spelling
divided
in
Change preposition
into
show examples
six stages.
Overall
it can be clearly seen that the 1st
grade
is the biggest contributor with the total percentage almost a quarter. Interestingly the 3rd
grade
experienced the lowest achievement.
To begin
with, 1st
grade
has
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
reached the fund at exactly 23.7%
then
followed by 2nd
grade
which gained 20.9% of the total money raised.
In addition
, the number of 5th
grade
Correct your spelling
graders
show examples
is gained precisely at 18%. Regarding the three other grades, the 6th
grade
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
stood at
roughtly
Correct your spelling
roughly
18%.
While
the 4th
grade
obtain
Wrong verb form
obtained
show examples
well below 14%, the figure for 3rd
grade
is positioned in the
last
at just below 8%z
Submitted by sofinnovita on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words grade with synonyms.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: