The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of vegetables and fruits per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of vegetables and fruits per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of vegetarian people eating five portions of food daily for the period of eight years between 2001 and 2008 in the UK.
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vegetarian women
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the highest of them all, compared to men and children.
According to
the data, women in Britain who enjoyed eating fruits and vegetables
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five times a day
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consistently higher than vegetarian men and kids.
Moreover
, the rate of vegetarian females eating large portions of meals tended to increase, from around 23% in 2001, by around 7% over the eight-year period, with a peak at 35% in 2006.
Similarly
, the percentage of vegetarian British males showed an upward trend as well,
although
not as high as the rate of women, from approximately 17% at the outset of the period, to just above 25% eight years later. Meanwhile, the proportion of children who enjoyed eating fruits and veggies was the lowest in comparison with the rate of the adults over the eight consecutive years.
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