Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,
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changes the way
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maintain relationships.
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some
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argue that
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technology
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made us more isolated than before, I believe modern
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bought
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people
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together in a positive way.
technology
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has brought us
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of ways to communicate more efficiently, it is only the
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of these ways who misuse them. Some
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may argue that modern
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could pose two negative effects.
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, it causes
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to have less time to interact with others in real
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.
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shallow
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may minimize the possibility of knowing someone on a deeper level
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because online personality could potentially create a false perception of relationships.
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, it is true that young
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today have a higher tendency to spend their time glued to their screens rather than meeting other
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real
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. Because of
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, they not only reduce their ability to socialize but
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increase the proportion of radiation effect they get.
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, I agree with those who believe that there are some pros of modern
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. The first benefit is that
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have fast access to communicate instantly. A number of applications,
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as Zoom, WhatsApp, and G-mail allow
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to do online meetings, video calls, and send electronic messages. Another benefit is that
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can share
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quickly. They will not need to worry about where and when they communicate because
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is no longer limited by geographical location. In conclusion,
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modern
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leads to negative sides in social
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, the existence of modern
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could ease
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's
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with others.
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, I remain convinced that modern
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gives a number of benefits to human
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and
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depends on the personal use of it .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • communicate
  • social media
  • virtual meetings
  • global community
  • isolation
  • distract
  • face-to-face interaction
  • personal connections
  • dependency
  • technology addiction
  • digital divide
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