The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the phases of a biofuel or ethanol-making process.
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, there are five steps that must be done after harvesting before the ethanol can be used as fuel for transportation tools, which later emit carbon dioxide
that is
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useful for the growth of plants and trees with the help of sunlight (to produce energy). The cycle begins with weeds and
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, acquiring their source of food (energy) from sunshine and carbon dioxide.
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, those organic materials are
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harvested by using a specialized car, which is later turned into cellulose by undergoing the pre-processing phase. After that, the cellulose undergoes the processing step to produce sugars; next microbes are added, resulting in an ethanol product that can be used as fuel for commuting apparatuses.
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, these machines will emit carbon dioxide gases that are important for crops to gain energy. At
this
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point, the steps will repeat.
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  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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