The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pictures illustrate the centre of Islip
town
currently, and a proposal layout for future development. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that more facilities are going to be built.
Also
, there will be new roads which make
this
small
town
more accessible. In the centre of the
town
, many departments are going to be established. The southern stores will be shifted a little bit to the south, and northern shops will be flattened completely,
instead
, there will be other departments
such
as a bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing region.
Additionally
, the main road will be removed and in the presented plan, there will be a route for pedestrians.
While
the parking location will remain unaltered at the bottom of the map, it will become much smaller, and there will be a new housing area close to
this
parking. There is a school in the southwest which will remain unchanged. Regarding the accessibility to the
town
, there will be a dual carriageway all around the city in the proposed plan.
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