The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pie charts illustrate various methods
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Canadian
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which Canadian
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and Australian
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people
how
they
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apply
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have
accessed
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to
news
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the news
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. It is clear from the given information that the
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figures
provide comparisons in diverse categories between people from these two different countries.
Overall
, the
popular
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most popular
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way for
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Australian
to watch
news
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the news
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is online with 52 per cent
then
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contrary in Canada the highest proportion
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40%
then
36% associated with TV and online
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respectively
.
Furthermore
, In
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Australia
, people tended to dismiss using Print to know the
news
,
therefore
this
method had only
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proportion compared to that in Canada which
were
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7 % and 14 % respectively.
Finally
, there is 2
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in Australia and 3 per cent in Canada
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recognised how people have reached the world's
news
To sum up
, we could say that different methods were implemented in accessing
news
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on the diversity of cultures and trends
for
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theses
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these
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countries.
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