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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart compares some
catagories
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categories
 of US
familie's
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families
houses in 3 different years.
Overall
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, the number of four classes fluctuated over 8 years,
while
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 the only class of
people
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 who earned between 75,000 to 99,999 remained the lowest.On top of that,
people
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 whose income is higher than 100,000 experienced a peak which had never been seen in
this
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 period. Looking at the chart more closely, it is significant to note that the figures for
people
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 who earned between 25000 to 49999 overtook the first place in 2011. After that year, the
people
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 whose income was higher than 1000,000 saw an obvious rise, by 10
million
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.
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, the class of
people
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 earned between which was around 15
million
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 on average in these three years.
However
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, the
people
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 whose income was between 50,000 to 74,999 and 75,000 to 99,999 were relatively stable, which was about 20
million
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 and 15
million
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 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, million with synonyms.
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