The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two illustrations represent the changes
of
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the town of Reymouth from 1995 to nowadays. We will see that the main innovations have been made in its northeast and southwest regions. Beginning
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the northern half of the town, we can
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observe in the east that the old park and the farming lands have been removed. In these places have been constructed
sport
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facilities for playing golf and tennis.
On the other hand
, the western residential area has been reordered and extended a little around a new road. At the bottom of both pictures, we can see the changes implemented in the coastal facilities. The shops, fish market and fishing port have been removed conjuntly. These buildings have been converted into
apartaments
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apartments
and restaurants.
On the other hand
, in the
southeast
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the coffee shop
remain
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the same and the hotel has uniquely a new car park in comparison with the past.
To sum up
, the village has mostly changed in its residential, commercial, natural and farming dimensions, maintaining only a few buildings the whole period.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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