The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two illustrations represent the changes

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the town of Reymouth from 1995 to nowadays. We will see that the main innovations have been made in its northeast and southwest regions. Beginning

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the northern half of the town, we can

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observe in the east that the old park and the farming lands have been removed. In these places have been constructed

sport

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facilities for playing golf and tennis.

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, the western residential area has been reordered and extended a little around a new road. At the bottom of both pictures, we can see the changes implemented in the coastal facilities. The shops, fish market and fishing port have been removed conjuntly. These buildings have been converted into

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apartments

and restaurants.

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, in the

southeast

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the coffee shop

remain

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the same and the hotel has uniquely a new car park in comparison with the past.

To sum up

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, the village has mostly changed in its residential, commercial, natural and farming dimensions, maintaining only a few buildings the whole period.

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Jul 9, 2024

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

176 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

development
village
Ryemouth
1995
present
houses
small school
residential areas
amenities
population
increased
growth
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