The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram gives information on how impactful five different industries are to Brazil's economy from 2009 to 2019, alongside a prediction for 2029. Each column represents five
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intervals for that particular year. Food processing and manufacturing are both predicted to take a huge fall by 2029. The former had 10% in 2009 but increased to 21% in 2019, yet is predicted to return to 10% by 2029. Manufacturing started above food processing with 21%. It showed a downward trend and is predicted to reach 5% by 2029, the lowest point in the graph. Tourism and oil, coal, and gas are thought to have minimal change compared to the rest. Tourism had 26% in 2009 before it slightly decreased to 20% in 2019. It is predicted to stay at 20% by 2029.
On the other hand
, oil, coal, and gas had just above 25% in 2009, growing to 31% in 2019. It is expected to return to 25% by 2029. The odd one out is finance, which started just above 30% in 2009, rose to 37% in 2019, and is predicted to keep on increasing to more than 40% in 2029.
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time period, finance is predicted to have a growing impact on Brazil's economy
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food processing and manufacturing fall.
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