Topic 2: These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has become more common

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people

move

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to other countries for business.

While

there are some

advanatages

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advantages

that

children

can gain from

this

trend, it is often believed that

children

can have negative impacts. I believe that

benefits

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will outweigh

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children

are more motivated to speak multiple languages despite the fact that they often suffer from a sense of isolation caused by their frequent moves. On the one hand,

children

are

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to gain incredible advantages from an educational perspective as they are more likely to gain the

ablilities

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abilities

of speaking

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diffrent

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different

tongues.

In other words

, those who have settled in different nations will become more fluent in various languages around the world. In fact, their growing needs to communicate with natives make it more essential to acquire their tongues so they can establish an intimate relationship.

Thus

, language abilities are significant, allowing them to express their feelings and

idea

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to understand mutual differences to work

coorperatively

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cooperatively

at school.

Furthermore

, their language skills not only determine whether they can make close friends

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they can trust or not but

also

their academic performance since their grades are hugely affected by the

indivual

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individual

ability to explain in an analytical and critical way.

Therefore

,

such

pressing situations they deal with in daily life will make them more encouraged to absorb language skills at

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accelerating speed than those who settle in their own country.

On the other hand

, there are some potential harms that

children

will experience from their move to foreign nations

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because

they frequently suffer from the feeling of isolation and

lonliness

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loneliness

. Indeed, it must be quite demanding for small

children

to get

along with

others, whose lifestyles and languages are different from their own.

Moreover

, cultural differences often make it hard for foreign settlers to understand what they are expected by native people.

For instance

, Japanese students often deal with the hardship

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attending classes in the

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United

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States as they are

suddently

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suddenly

required to verbalize their thoughts to exchange with other students through discussions and

presentaions

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presentations

.

This

style of learning is quite different from Japanese traditional education, where they are often expected to sit quietly and take notes as they listen to teachers' lectures.

As a result

, they are overwhelmed by

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great shock and confusion, not knowing what to do, which will lead to their

seperation

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separation

from others. In conclusion, I believe there are more benefits to

children

when they move to various nations, where they are more promoted to improve their skills to communicate with those with diverse

backgrouds

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backgrounds

.

However

, they often have to go through a difficult moment when they feel isolated in

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society whose culture is different from their one.