MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
The line chart shows the number of international students in
australia
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Australia
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with different
hometown
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hometowns
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, there is a continuous increase in the number of international students across the countries of residence, with Indonesia in
lead
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the lead
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and Hong Kong
comes
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coming
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as
last
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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