MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart shows the number of international students in
australia
with different Change the capitalization
Australia
hometown
.
Fix the agreement mistake
hometowns
Overall
, there is a continuous increase in the number of international students across the countries of residence, with Indonesia in lead
and Hong Kong Correct article usage
the lead
comes
as Wrong verb form
coming
last
.Submitted by hardychau on
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