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Your manager wants you to make a report of your current project and send it to him tomorrow, but you run out of time and need one more day to prepare. Write an email to your manager: Saying why you need a delay of one more day Explaining your overload at the moment Stating your apology and guarantee of your deadline Try to write a minimum of 50 words

#manager #report #project #tomorrow #time #email #delay #overload #moment #apology #guarantee #deadline
Subjects: Request for One-Day Extension on Project
Report
 Dear Mrs Thao, I hope
this
 email finds you well. I am writing to request a one-day extension for
summitting
Correct your spelling
submitting
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 the current project
report
.
Due to
 an unexpected increase in workload and tight
deadline
Fix the agreement mistake
deadlines
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 on other tasks, I need additional time to ensure the
report
 meets our standards. I apologize for any inconvenience
this
 may cause and guarantee the completed
report
 by the end of the day tomorrow. Thank you for your understanding. Best regard, Thu Bui
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task achievement
To add some more specific examples or details which justify the request for an extension would improve the context and comprehensiveness of your explanation.
task achievement
Include a brief summary of the key updates you've made so far in the project report, emphasizing your progress and dedication.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure is extremely clear, making it easy for the reader to follow your reasoning and understand your request.
coherence cohesion
The email starts and ends in a respectful and professional manner, which is crucial in business communication.
task achievement
The task response is complete and addresses all the required points clearly and succinctly.

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