You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: describe your experience tell him why you are interested in the job say why you think you would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the search of a part-time job in your

restaurant

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which has been advertised in

last

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week's newspaper. As I had been working as a

restaurant

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manager in Tim Hortons for three years, not only

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, before

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position I

also

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worked as team leader in the same

restaurant

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, I have enough

experience

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to meet the requirements for

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position. Since I left my previous job,I

was

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looking for an employer who can provide me

part-time

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with part-time

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workplacements

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work placements

work-placements

work placement

along with

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experience

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restaurant

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, My fascination for taking

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opportunity increases when I checked the popularity of

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restaurant

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in the Greater Toronto area. From my

experience

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and observations, I think I would be

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the

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suitable candidate for

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job.

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, I am willing to stay for longer hours but only on weekends

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mu studies even I can do afternoon or night shifts on weekends. I hope my

experience

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would

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be considered and I look forward to your prompt response. Yours Sincerely, Amanjot Kaur.

Submitted by amanjotkaur0303 on Tue Jul 09 2024

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coherence cohesion

Try to use paragraphs to separate different points or ideas. This will help the reader to follow your letter more easily. For example, you can separate your experience, your interest in the job, and why you are suitable for it into different paragraphs.

task achievement

Ensure all verbs are in the correct tense. For example, "As I had been working" could be changed to "As I worked" to improve accuracy.

task achievement

You have effectively addressed the requirements of the task by describing your experience, explaining your interest, and highlighting your suitability for the job.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately formal for a job application letter.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

175 words

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