You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: describe your experience tell him why you are interested in the job say why you think you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in the search of a part-time job in your
restaurant
which has been advertised in last
week's newspaper.
As I had been working as a restaurant
manager in Tim Hortons for three years, not only this
, before this
position I also
worked as team leader in the same restaurant
. Therefore
, I have enough experience
to meet the requirements for this
position.
Since I left my previous job,I was
looking for an employer who can provide me Wrong verb form
have been
part-time
Change preposition
with part-time
workplacements
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work placements
work-placements
work placement
along with
an experience
of
a Change preposition
in
restaurant
. Besides
, My fascination for taking this
opportunity increases when I checked the popularity of this
restaurant
in the Greater Toronto area.
From my experience
and observations, I think I would be Correct article usage
a
the
suitable candidate for Correct article usage
a
this
job. Moreover
, I am willing to stay for longer hours but only on weekends due to
mu studies even I can do afternoon or night shifts on weekends.
I hope my experience
would
be considered and I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours Sincerely,
Amanjot Kaur.Wrong verb form
will
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coherence cohesion
Try to use paragraphs to separate different points or ideas. This will help the reader to follow your letter more easily. For example, you can separate your experience, your interest in the job, and why you are suitable for it into different paragraphs.
task achievement
Ensure all verbs are in the correct tense. For example, "As I had been working" could be changed to "As I worked" to improve accuracy.
task achievement
You have effectively addressed the requirements of the task by describing your experience, explaining your interest, and highlighting your suitability for the job.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal for a job application letter.