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MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant

MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
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The graph line describes four different countries of residence of overseas students in
Ausralia
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Australia
 between 1982-2000.
Overall
, it can be pointed out from the graph that, Indonesia had improved the most
while
Hong
Kong
 was the least over the given
peroid
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period
.
Beginning
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 of the 1982 years all different countries started
the
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 same point
besides
Molaysia
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Malaysia
. In 1988 4 various countries were going up from 0 to 23.
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 is obvious from the chart that, Malaysia jumped down in 1998. It took
places
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place
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 in
Hong
Kong
 too.
Hong
Kong
 had little decline between 1998-20200
IN
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 addition,
number
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a number
the number
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 of students in 100 selected
countires
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countries
 of residence of arrival for education
Malaysia
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in Malaysia
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abd
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and
Hong
Kong
 were the same point in 2000.
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