MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant

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The graph line describes four different countries of residence of overseas students in

Ausralia

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Australia

between 1982-2000.

Overall

, it can be pointed out from the graph that, Indonesia had improved the most

while

Hong

Kong

was the least over the given

peroid

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period

Beginning

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of the 1982 years all different countries started

the

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at the

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same point

besides

Molaysia

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Malaysia

. In 1988 4 various countries were going up from 0 to 23.

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is obvious from the chart that, Malaysia jumped down in 1998. It took

places

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place

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Hong

Kong

too.

Hong

Kong

had little decline between 1998-20200

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addition,

number

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a number

the number

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of students in 100 selected

countires

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countries

of residence of arrival for education

Malaysia

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in Malaysia

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abd

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and

Hong

Kong

were the same point in 2000.

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