The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram depicts the instant
noodles
manufacturing process.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it’s clear that the instant Linking Words
noodles
process includes eight stages Use synonyms
according to
the diagram, commencing with storing flour in Silos and ending with labelling and sealing.
First of all, flour is transported by trucks to be stored in silos, Linking Words
then
it is transferred to the factory where it will be blended in a mixture craft with water and oil.Linking Words
in
the next stage, the processed dough is shaped into sheets by rollers will be changed to strips doughs to create Capitalize word
In
noodles
discs.
In the following, noodle discs will be sautéed in an oil basin and Use synonyms
then
should be dried. Dry Linking Words
noodles
will be transferred to special cups, and Use synonyms
then
vegetables and spices will be added to the cups to savour them for different palates. Linking Words
finally
, they will be labelled and sealed in a machine, Linking Words
then
they are ready to use.Linking Words
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