The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2021.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides key information about the countries that were ranked as the top ten for electricity
production
and
consumption
in 2021. The units are measured in
billion
kWh
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that China had the highest level of
production
and
consumption
.
In addition
, among these countries, 9 of them produced more than what they consumed,
whereas
just Germany showed a higher number of
consumption
compared with
production
.
According to
what is shown, China and
US
Correct article usage
the US
show examples
were the most
region
Change the noun form
regions
show examples
that produced and consumed electricity with
production
digits of 5348 and 4009
billion
KWh
, and usage numbers of 5322 and 3806
billion
KWh
respectively.
In contrast
, Russia, Japan, and India showed modest figures
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
production
with 1057, 936.8 and 871
billion
KWh
respectively. In terms of Canada, France, and Brazil they all produced approximately 600 b
KWh
,
while
they almost used 500
billion
kWh
of electricity.
Moreover
, Germany consumed 65.9
billion
kWh
more than what they produced.
Finally
, Korea. Rep. almost had an equivalent amount of
production
and
consumption
, and it was nearly 459
billion
kWh
.
Submitted by marim.almualim on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, consumption, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual aspect
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • industrial base
  • population size
  • significant difference
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • electrical energy
  • ranking
  • economic patterns
  • industrial patterns
  • technological advancements
  • disparity
  • industrial development
  • economic capabilities
  • anomalies
  • export
  • import
  • energy efficiency
  • waste
What to do next:
Look at other essays: