The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian coountries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian coountries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of
urbans
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urban
in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020,
along with
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its prediction for the years 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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in all countries, the rate of people living in cities tended to increase from 1970 until 2020 and the numbers
is
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predicted to grow over the next two decades.
According to
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the data, the rise of
urbans
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urban
in Malaysia and Indonesia showed a similar pattern. In both countries, the number of urban societies consistently grew by around 45% and 35%, respectively, from the beginning of the period until the next fifty years.
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, the rate of
such
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communities is predicted to increase until they reach their peak at around 85% and 60%, consecutively, in 2040.
Moreover
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, the percentage of city populations in the Philippines and Thailand people majorly increased during the first fifty-year period as well, by less than 20% each.
Similarly
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, the percentage of city-goers in both countries
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also
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predicted to rise twenty years later,
although
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not as much as in Malaysia and Indonesia, ranging from 45% to 55%.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • population
  • percentage
  • trend
  • growth
  • stagnation
  • prediction
  • projection
  • rapid
  • gradual
  • significant
  • factors
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