These days,
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has been improving tremendously. than ever before.
However
, a large number of the population in
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overweight and
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even if they have
a Correct article usage
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better healthcare amenities
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the ministry. A lack of physical exercise
coupled with
eating junk
foods
are the stems for
this
phenomenon; There are some effects of
this
situation
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thatCorrect pronoun usage
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,
thisCorrect word choice
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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
There are two causes that bring
this
tendency; one of the key reasons is that mankind who
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in developed nations
he Correct pronoun usage
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neither
Physical activities nor sports,
consequently
,
this
leadCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to gaining weight. Western Countries humankind do not have
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their body
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in fit,
besides
they usually go to pups
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themselves. Another Vital cause is
that Correct word choice
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eating junk
foods
and soft drinks frequently
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and
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,
as a consequence
, People suffer
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issues; the main reason
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they eat Pocket foodstuff, which Price is not expensive. Taking Australia,
for example
, McDonalt's dead
all Correct determiner usage
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foods
are inexpensive, a burger price is just 2 AUD.
Hence
, they eat often these
foods
and
gainingVerb problem
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overweight.
There are some impacts of
this
phenomenon. People who are
being Verb problem
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overweight always
bullyWrong verb form
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fromChange preposition
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others who
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slim,
this
mostly happens in high
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; bullying can affect
.
For instance
,
according to
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new research, at present, research has found 45% of
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high
schoolsFix the agreement mistake
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students
haveVerb problem
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affected
because of bullying,
whichCorrect word choice
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being overweight
Also
,
obesity
can lead to getting more deadly diseases
to Change preposition
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humans,
thisCorrect pronoun usage
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means individuals will acquire numerous diseases
such
as heart stroke, heart attack and diabetic type 2. Ergo, being
obesityReplace the word
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and overweight
bringCorrect subject-verb agreement
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more toxic effects.
In Conclusion, developed countries have modernized healthcare
their citizens are Suffering
obesity
issue because of
a lack of exercise
along with
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more junk
foods
frequently.
ItsCorrect pronoun usage
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to many deadly illnesses
as well
asCorrect word choice
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people can
affectWrong verb form
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fromChange preposition
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bullying are the effects of
this
situation.