Climate change is an important global issue. Rising temperatures, extreme weather events, and environmental loss hurt our planet. Individual actions (such as recycling and taking public transportation) are the solution to reducing climate change. Do you agree or disagree?

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contemporary life, the topic of climate change has gained in popularity, making a paradigm shift in human being's living conditions.
Although
many advantages may derive from personal
actions
in terms of alleviating
this
phenomenon, it is believed that
actions
from other stakeholders
also
hold imperative impacts.
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analazy
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analyze
analyse
the role of the governments and environmental organizations before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. On the one hand, the
governments'
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influence in mitigating climate-related problems is vital in every
countries
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around the world. One perceived role of the officials is to launch
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campaigns in order to raise awareness among their population about natural disasters, which would change the viewpoints of the majority of the population.
This
eventually
resulting
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in the
increasing
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of smaller campaigns, workshops and seminars powered by individuals and private companies towards
this
problem.
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of
encouranging
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encouraging
policy makers
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policymakers
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to take action is countries, especially those who have poor
environmetal
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environments
, would have a well-rounded plan to tackle
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global warming. Since individual
actions
cannot have profound impacts on the planet or even can
leads
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to several unwanted consequences
due to
the lack of complex knowledge about the big picture of the environment, a
detail
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plan by the official which has
consider
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realated
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related
aspects is highly beneficial in the long term.
On the other hand
,
actions
by environmental organizations are crucial
due to
convincing reasons. The biggest one is these inspiring groups which launched by the young or well-known environmentalist would inspire a myriad of people, especially the youthful enthusiasts, to take
actions
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.
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not only
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the horizontal of the young but
also
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the growing trends towards global problems among the society, eventually
encourage
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younger generations to become
for
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responsible for events around the world.
In addition
, organizations are
also
active in
this
problem which helps the government a lot. In conclusion, despite the merits
may
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derive from individual
actions
, the role of other stakeholders is needed to ensure the effectiveness of solutions aiming for solving
climate-realated
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climate-related
problems. It is,
thus
, hoped that not only individuals, the governments but
also
more and more people will take steps to deal with
this
internaltional
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international
scale problem at its root for a fresh environment.
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task achievement
Good job in analyzing the role of governments and environmental organizations. However, include clearer and more detailed examples to make your points more persuasive.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to proofread for grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'analazy' which should be 'analyze,' 'widen the horizontal' which needs to be 'broaden the horizon,' and 'internaltional' which should be 'international.'
task achievement
You have provided a clear and comprehensive response, considering various aspects of the topic, not just individual actions.
coherence cohesion
The essay is well-organized with a strong introduction and conclusion that summarize your main points effectively.
coherence cohesion
Well-structured paragraphs with clear main points and supporting arguments, showing logical progression in your arguments.

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