Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desserts or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists to visit such places?

The advancement that the world has made in terms of transportation and technology, has made travelling possible today

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any part of the world.

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platforms have created awareness of the go-to places for exploration with complete details

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as what to expect and how to prepare for travel.

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has encouraged people to travel to tough destinations. No matter if it is the hottest spot on earth with barren land or the coldest spot on

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, travelling is much easier and safer today than ever before. Travelling to uneasy places sounds challenging yet exciting and must be experienced often. The benefits of visiting terrains with difficult conditions

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like moving away from the regular environment and routine lifestyle. The mind and body feel relaxed undergoing changes in living conditions. Consider

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living in a busy metro city like Karachi

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Okara, he would enjoy the clear clouds, green fields,

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water from streams and would feel peaceful. At the same

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there are

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associated with travelling to difficult places. The risk of being out of necessary supplies required for survival is the biggest threat, One of my

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, Saad

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travelling by road to the

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got his tank leaked and he ran out of drinking water. He had to travel far to reach a place where drinking water was

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. The situation was scary. Travelling is fun but all preparations are precautions must be met.