The diagram below gives the producing process for making sugar out of sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
process diagram illustrates how sugar
is manufactured.
Overall
, the process involves a single ingredient (sugar
cane), some equipment (a harvester, an evaporator, and a centrifuge), and several stages (growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying juice, evaporating, centrifuging, drying, and cooking).
The first stage is to grow sugar
canes
for 12-18 months. After growing, the Fix the agreement mistake
cane
sugar
canes
are harvested and then
crushed. Following that, the juice extracted from the sugar
canes
is purified. Once purified, the liquid becomes molasses.
Next,
the liquid undergoes centrifugation, which involves using a centrifuge to separate the fructose crystals from the syrup. Finally
, the lactose crystals are dried and cooked. After these steps, the sugar
is ready for use.
Thus
, this
diagram outlines the stages involved in producing carbohydrates from sugar
canes
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