The diagram below presents the producing process for making sugar out of sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The presented picture illustrates

way

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a way

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of getting

sugar

from

sugar

canes through human-machine cooperation.

Overall

, there is one and only

ingredient

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one ingredient

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(

sugar

cane),

large

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a large

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number of steps and several equipment (

combine

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combined

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harvester, crusher, filter, evaporator, centrifuge and dry cooler)

that

is

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are

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required to produce some

sugar

.

To begin

with, the period for

sugar

cane to grow is between 1-1,5

year

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years

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.

After

this

, the season of harvesting starts

due to

growth

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the growth

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of

sugar

canes

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cane

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are finished. Collecting the harvest might be completed in 2 ways,

such

as by combine harvester or by

human

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humans

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. Crushing the

sugar

canes

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cane

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,

squishing

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and squishing

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its juice is the next stage completed by

crusher

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the crusher

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machine.

Thereafter

, retrieve-purified juice goes through

limestone

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a limestone

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filter, making it to

evaporator

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the evaporator

an evaporator

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, heated below, where juice transforms into syrup.

Received

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The received

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syrup moves to the centrifuge. Centrifuge’s main goal is to separate

sugar

crystals from syrup.

Wet

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A wet

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and hot substance called “

sugar

” gets dried and cooled in a specific piece of equipment.

Finally

, after drying and cooling, the production of

sugar

is finished.