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Your friend has asked you to teach English to their child. However, you do not have any English books so would like to borrow some from your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter say which course you are taking describe the type of books you need to borrow ask to borrow the books

#friend #english #child #books #teacher #course #type
Dear Mrs. Smith, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
 missive to request you, to kindly, lend me some English grammar books as I have to teach a teen studying in tenth grade. I will be teaching him
advance
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 grammar which includes
topic
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 like
complex-compound
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 sentences, subject-verb
argeement
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agreement
 and complex tenses.
Therefore
, I require that specific book from which you used to teach us. It is called 'Learn from the Expert'. Books on
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 is
also
 my
necessaite
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necessity
necessaire
 as understanding
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 vocabulary will be beneficial for the student.
Apart from
this
, if you have any other suggestions from where I can obtain more study material that will be of great help. I hope you will allow me to borrow these books. Looking forward
your
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 response. Thank you Yours sincerely, Bindiya Gupta
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that every paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity and coherence.
task achievement
A few grammatical and spelling corrections could make your letter clearer and more polished. For example, 'agreements' instead of 'argeement' and 'necessity' instead of 'necessaite'.
greeting and closing
The letter is well-organized with an appropriate greeting and closing.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, which suits the purpose of the request well.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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