As water is valuable resource, governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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undeniable resource for human beings. It is a valuable resource, so, the

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usage from their citizens

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around the world. I

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the following paragraphs. To commence with, the

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scarcity in some parts of the world, so, the ruling party should take some measures to save

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, and how to save

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videos, dramas, and billboards, and

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of waste. Hereby,

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waste

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resources.

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resources and how we should protect

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practice to them wing minimum

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everyday work.

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should use irrigation

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for their land, families should try to minimize their house chores of

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utilise and factories should not dump

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their factory

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into

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strict actions that need to be monitored by the authorities. In conclusion,

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of utmost significance in

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lives,

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who misuse natural

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crucial issues.

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As water is valuable resource, governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that children should be raised by all family members like grandparents, uncles and aunts and not just parents. Discuss both side and give your opinion?

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home happened, which means that you must change the date of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain the important event • apologize for the situation • suggest a new arrangement

These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?