Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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The given map illustrates the expansion of
particular
town Correct article usage
a particular
nearby
London Correct your spelling
near
due to
the population increasing
Replace the word
increase
during
1868 to 1994, especially in the Change preposition
from
developtment
of various types of roads and neighborhood areas. Over the time period, there were circulations built in Correct your spelling
development
nineteenth
era and four residential groups Correct article usage
the nineteenth
surrounding
.
Correct pronoun usage
surrounding them
To begin
with main road, it was mainly built to spread the not only city from north to south, but also
from west to east. After that, the primary changes were in the constructions
of Fix the agreement mistake
construction
railway
and motorway. The former extended Correct article usage
the railway
south
part of the focus area from left to right side through Chorleywood station in 1970, Correct article usage
the south
while
the latter were
made Change the verb form
was
in
the west side crossing with two above-mentioned roads by Change preposition
on
traffic
circle on the upper part.
Moving on to the village transformation history, they Correct article usage
a traffic
were
Change the verb form
were initially located
initially
locate in the center
from 1868 to 1883, before a scaling up to Change the spelling
centre
southside
between 1883 and 1922. After the railway was constructed, there Correct article usage
the southside
is
the third residence pressed on two sides of the second in 1922. Wrong verb form
was
Finally
, due to
the success of motorway
, the upper and lower east side were replaced by the final village in 1970.Correct article usage
the motorway
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