The map shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. a Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The two maps illustrate the village of Ryuemoth, which is situated near the sea,

how

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and how

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it changed from 1995 till

present

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the present

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days

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day

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. 23 There

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considerable

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was consederable

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consederable

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considerable

development

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the area over these years and it was gradually transformed from a small fishing village into

coastal

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the coastal

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town The most notable change is the area near the sea, there are lots of apartments at present days. Fishing

port

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dissappeared

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disappeared

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fish markets

having

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been replaced by

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cottage

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cottages

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. Along the main street new road was constructed on

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land and many

residental

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residential

properties were built.There

also

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used to be shops standing opposite

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apply

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fish markets. In response to

considerable

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increase

population

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in population

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, shops were substituted by restaurants.

Whilist

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Whilst

hotel,

café

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remained, nearby the hotel was built a car park. Farmland and forest park

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apply

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can be seen to

south-east

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the south-east

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of the main road, having been changed by golf and tennis court.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

148 words

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The map shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. a Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Many students around the world don’t choose science subjects at university. Give the reasons for this and describe the impact on the community?

Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.