The map shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. a Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The two maps illustrate the village of Ryuemoth, which is situated near the sea,

how

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and how

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it changed from 1995 till

present

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the present

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days

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day

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. 23 There

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considerable

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was consederable

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consederable

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considerable

development

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the area over these years and it was gradually transformed from a small fishing village into

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the coastal

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town The most notable change is the area near the sea, there are lots of apartments at present days. Fishing

port

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dissappeared

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disappeared

therefore

fish markets

having

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been replaced by

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the

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cottage

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cottages

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. Along the main street new road was constructed on

this

land and many

residental

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residential

properties were built.There

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used to be shops standing opposite

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fish markets. In response to

considerable

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a considerable

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increase

population

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in population

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, shops were substituted by restaurants.

Whilist

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Whilst

hotel,

café

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remained, nearby the hotel was built a car park. Farmland and forest park

these

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can be seen to

south-east

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the south-east

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of the main road, having been changed by golf and tennis court.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

148 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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