The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the variation in
percentage
of foreigners that visited Add an article
the percentage
art
gallery
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galleries
pavilion
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pavilions
pier
, and Fix the agreement mistake
piers
festival
in England, particularly Brighton during a 30-year period from 1980 to 2010. As Fix the agreement mistake
festivals
it
can be seen from the graph, Correct pronoun usage
apply
pavilion
owned the highest percentage of tourists, Correct article usage
the pavilion
while
pier
underwent the lowest fluctuation with few numbers.
If you gave the chart a look, you would notice that Correct article usage
the pier
festival
was much higher popular in Correct article usage
the festival
1980s
by 30%, Change the article
the 1980s
while
pier
recorded the less desire by 10%. Nearly 20% and 24% of British people aimed art
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for art
gallery
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galleries
as well as
pavilion
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pavilions
,
and took them as their destination respectively. In 1985, Remove the comma
apply
art
Correct article usage
the art
gallery
climbed to hit Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
its
peak by Correct pronoun usage
their
one third
. Frequently, roughly 49% of tourists were attracted by Add a hyphen
one-third
pavilion
during 1995, Correct article usage
the pavilion
while
festival
experienced a steady stability and ranged between 20% and 30%.
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the festival
In the
next 15 years, Change preposition
The
however
, saw a slight decrease in pavilion's
visitors. In 2005, there was Correct article usage
the pavilion's
intersection
at 15% of Correct article usage
an intersection
pier
and Correct article usage
the pier
art
gallery
, followed by two opposite operations of climbing to 22% and declining to 8%. During the same period, the percentage of festival's
seekers stayed stable at Change noun form
festival
two fifth
.Correct your spelling
two-fifths
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