Some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in the laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human use to what extent do you agree or disagree

Several individuals believe that conducting
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
laboratory testing
to
Change preposition
on
show examples
animals
should be done in order to ensure
it's
Correct your spelling
its
show examples
safety
ince
Correct your spelling
if
it is consumed by societies. I tend to disagree with
this
statement
due to
its cruelty,
while
in fact, there is an alternative way when it comes to
product
testing these days. First and foremost, it is cruel to cause
animals
suffer
Add the particle
to suffer
show examples
from pain. The results of
such
laboratory experiments to the animal's health system might not be predicted, since scientists are still in their testing phase and the results of the tests in the lab might not come as expected. The chemicals contained in the
product
's prototype,
therefore
, could be dangerous to some
animals
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
or even could be deadly for them.
For instance
, rabbits might
have
Verb problem
be
show examples
allergic or
died
Wrong verb form
die
show examples
after being tested
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
cosmetics
Correct article usage
a cosmetics
show examples
lab
due to
chemicals like mercury and
hydroquinon
Correct your spelling
hydroquinone
, which are the main ingredients of
such
products
.
Additionally
, in
this
technological era, there are lots of options
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
product
testings
Fix the agreement mistake
testing
show examples
rather than using
animals
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
the lab. Recently, higher-technological facilities are being used in several hospitals.
In other words
, there are possibilities for using computer-assisted tools in terms of
product
testing before launching it to the market. Artificial intelligence can be maximized as a tool to detect whether the ingredients within the
products
are safe for
human
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
show examples
. To illustrate, Loreal Group use computer-based reconstructed human skin, which are similar to
human's
Change noun form
human
show examples
skin textures, in testing their
products
rather than testing on the skin of the living creatures. In conclusion, I believe that it is not an appropriate way to conduct experiments with
animals
before selling the
products
to customers, since it may cause pain to the
animals
itself
Correct pronoun usage
themselves
show examples
.
While
Correct word choice
On
show examples
on the other hand
, there is another option to choose as an alternative way in terms of
product
testing
instead
of causing harm to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
other creatures.
Submitted by michellyonggo on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Coherence and Cohesion
Pay attention to minor grammatical errors and ensure smooth transitions between ideas for even better coherence and cohesion.
Task Achievement
Work on refining the examples provided to make them more impactful and directly related to your main points.
Coherence and Cohesion
You have a clear and structured approach to presenting your argument, which enhances the logical flow of your essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay includes both an introduction and a conclusion, making it well-rounded.
Task Achievement
You provided relevant and specific examples to support your position, which strengthens your argument.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • guarantee
  • safe
  • human use
  • scientists
  • experimenting
  • laboratory
  • animal testing
  • valuable information
  • alternative methods
  • equally effective
  • product safety
  • ethical concerns
  • cruel
  • inhumane
  • technologies
  • advancements
  • research
  • reduce
  • replace
  • regulations
  • guidelines
  • ethical treatment
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!