The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
bar chart show
us Change the verb form
shows
about
the percentage of Change preposition
apply
people
those
who were born in Correct pronoun usage
apply
Australia
and outside Australia
who is
livingCorrect subject-verb agreement
are
3
Change preposition
in 3
differents
Correct your spelling
different
area
which are urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Base
on the bar chart in 1995, Wrong verb form
Based
between
Change preposition
apply
people
born in Australia
and people
born outside Australia
are slightly different. People
who born
outside Add a missing verb
are born
Australia
living
in cities and rural areas Correct word choice
and living
are dramatically increase
than those who Change the verb form
are dramatically increasing
are dramatically increased
born
in Add a missing verb
are born
Australia
. Furthermore
, people
born in Austlia
living in Correct your spelling
Australia
Towns
is
steadily higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
born outside Australia
. Moreover
, if we are looking
Wrong verb form
look
to
the bar chart in 2010, Change preposition
at
people
born in Australia
living in towns
and rural ares
are stable and those who Correct your spelling
areas
born
outside Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
living in rural ares
dramatically Correct your spelling
areas
drop and
lower than Wrong verb form
dropped
people
living in towns
.
Last
but not least, between 1995 and 2010. People
in 2010 are living in cities steadily rising
and those who Wrong verb form
rose
living
in Change the form of the verb
live
towns
and rural ares
Correct your spelling
areas
are
dramatically Verb problem
apply
drop
Wrong verb form
dropped
compare
to 1995.Wrong verb form
compared
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, australia, towns with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 3 times.
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