The diagram below shows the process of producing yogurt in a factory. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided process indicates how
yoghurt
is produced in a factory.
Use synonyms
Overall
,there are seven steps for manufacturing Yogurt,starting from putting Linking Words
milk
in a distinguished time and finishing with delivering Use synonyms
yoghurt
buckets by trucks.
First of all,some Use synonyms
milk
is heated in a pot in order to maintain at 90Use synonyms
°c
or (200°F) for 30 minutes.Use synonyms
Moreover
,If the Linking Words
milk
is set in the steam for more than 30 minutes,the provided Use synonyms
yoghurt
will be thicker.The second step is the decreasing temperature from 90Use synonyms
°c
to 44Use synonyms
°c
so that Use synonyms
milk
can be cooled in the plate.Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
,once the workers have added live bacteria into the steam in the factory,the Linking Words
milk
is Use synonyms
then
set at 37Linking Words
°c
or (100°F) for 4 hours.
Use synonyms
The next step is
that the prepared Linking Words
milk
is placed in the refrigerator for some time.Afterwards,the workers pour some sugar and spices into the pot in order to add some flavours.Use synonyms
The following step is
that the produced Linking Words
yoghurt
is poured into several buckets so that a truck Use synonyms
collects
and Wrong verb form
can collect
delivers
them to other stores.Correct subject-verb agreement
deliver
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